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Louisiana Dancers

November 29, 2016
By MadisonMercer BRONZE, Paducah, Kentucky
MadisonMercer BRONZE, Paducah, Kentucky
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Cajun sands float in the

foamy Gulf waters,

 

Dancing in tiny circles the graceful sands

transform into ballroom dancers,

 

Little fish drowsily

drift through the hypnotic waters

 

Upsetting the little ballroom dancers

with every twitch of their fins.

 

Togehter they dance a dance

the dorwsy fish and graceful sands.


The author's comments:

It has always been a dream of mine to go and visit Louisiana. I went to Panama City when I was in Elementry school. That was the closet I've got to being near Louisiana. The first time I saw the Ocean amazed me. The way the waters spun the sand around was so graceful. The little fish that swam by my toes were also very entertaining to watch. So when I wrote this poem I wrote about what I hoped it would be like to see the Gulf when visiting Louisiana.


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