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The Race

March 29, 2016
By Abi_Jay BRONZE, Wyckoff, New Jersey
Abi_Jay BRONZE, Wyckoff, New Jersey
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2%
two percent,
the sharp line of red
a slash of blood in the corner
of the laptop screen
i’m racing time and technology
trying to pen a poem before
blackness
before my typing is no more than
a baby pressing buttons on dad’s old phone

it’s still at two percent
did past writers feel the same
as the ink in their pens started to run out
as the solid lines turned to trickled slashes
like the slash of red in the corner

 

1%
the alert jumps out at me
a jack-in-the-box, expected but startling
the low battery alert
i keep typing, clinging to
some desperation of the mind
some battle against all odds, like
a gladiator against a lion in the ring
only instead of claws and teeth,
it’s batteries and ink

 

0%
i didn’t even know this was a possibility
to run on nothing but still run
perhaps my willpower,
my fingers pressed into the keys
give some electric courage
but my pen still running out of ink
i can’t waste a second
can’t make a blot somewhere
can’t discount the clock, because
the second hand is my competitor
i will beat the lion that is time
that is the clock
that i


The author's comments:

With the technology revolution, the way we write is changing. I write almost everything on my computer, which can be both helpful and hindering. The idea for this poem originated while I was writing and noticed that my laptop was at 2%. I wondered how much of a poem I could write before my laptop died, and made a pact with myself that whatever I had written by the time the screen went black was where the poem would end. And so, my poem finishes with the incomplete "that i", leaving the reader to finish it for themself.


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