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Poor Mr. Friola

March 11, 2016
By asxp.brayden BRONZE, San Antonio, Texas
asxp.brayden BRONZE, San Antonio, Texas
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I have been hurt,

Crushed by the ones I thought loved me.

They used me, I thought it would be forever, 

But I was crushed beneath their feet.

They said they loved me, but I was just another drink.

They replaced me so fast, you didnt even have to blink.

We used to go everywhere together, we were unseperable.

But once I had had nothing left,

They threw me out.

Now they are in loving memory of, Mr. Friola,

They bought me, used me, threw me out

And replaced me with Coca-Cola


The author's comments:

When I was writng this piece, my class and I were talking about figurative language and action verbs. We had to make a personification about a soda can once it is thrown away. Mr. Friola is the name of the soda. I combined Dr. Pepper, Fanta, Sprite, and Coca-Cola into one.


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