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Poison Apple

March 8, 2016
By Anonymous

Angry and childish, like a certain cartoon duck,
Who you share names with.
Somehow, you haven't run out of luck.
You think you can build a wall,
To block out all your problems.
The higher one rises, the harder they fall.
You've bankrupted many companies,
Next is probably our country.
Bad enough to steal subsides;
You're a man lower than dirt,
Who's not worth the effort.


The author's comments:

About Donald Trump.


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on Apr. 1 2017 at 12:58 pm
HereSheIs BRONZE, Wellesley, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"We can easily forgive a child who is afraid of the dark; the real tragedy of life is when men are afraid of the light." -Plato

I agree with your Trump-hating sentiments 100%, and you have some awesome roasts in there. (Like the Donald Duck reference and the "you think you can build a wall/to block out all your problems") However, this might do a bit better as a poem without rhyming — you have more room to use the best words without worrying about rhyming, and you can cut out or change a few lines like "you haven't run out of luck". Overall, great job though!