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As Empty as the Sea

December 1, 2015
By Brennab BRONZE, Fort Jones, California
Brennab BRONZE, Fort Jones, California
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The sounds of waves hitting the rocks,

the smell of salt air

the peace;

even just for a split second,

settles my worries 

as the seagulls cry out 

circling the sea

 

I remember you 

as inviting as the calm waves,

coaxing me in, 

time and time again

but you were no peaceful force

you revealed to me a storm,

full of warm rain and crashing waters

 

I let you tear me apart bit by bit,

not realizing the storm would end,

taking pieces of me with it,

only for you to disappear

and leave me waiting by the sea, 

hoping for another storm


The author's comments:

I have always stood out at my small school. I wear black nail polish, drink tea and write poetry, which is unusual for a girl in a small farming community. I wrote this piece describing the sorrow one has when losing someone or being rejected by one they want the most. A broken heart's despair inspired me to write this poem. 


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