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The Day You Ran

October 27, 2015
By hansk BRONZE, Abington, Massachusetts
hansk BRONZE, Abington, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"Do not go where the path may lead, go instead where there is no path and leave a trail" -Ralph Waldo Emerson


We were inseparable,

Up in the swing set,
Down in the sandbox,
Hiding in our secret spot,
We had each other.

We could sit for hours,
Staring into the abyss,
Listening to our harmonic breathing,
Unsaid thoughts were spoken,
Spoken between silence,
We had each other.

We were inseparable,
But you drifted,
Slowly enthralled with poison,
Your veins boiling,
You couldn't escape your fate,
You were destined to die.

I didn't get to say goodbye,
You were gone,
You had been gone,
You weren't yourself,
No energetic pulses,
Just depressed faces,
If I only knew what battle you were fighting,
But I wonder would that change anything.

Somewhere I know the answer is not what I would hope,
I loved you before you were cursed,
I still love you,
But you ran to the rainbow bridge.

Maybe we'll meet again,
Once I cross that bridge,
I'll search for you,
And we can run together,
Happy ever after.


The author's comments:

My dog Maggie who I grew up with since I was two years old, recently passed away from cancer that was very sudden. I never got to say goodbye but I showed her how much I loved her each day we grew up. I knew she didn't need me to tell her 'I love you' she already knew it. I hope people get that it's okay if you don't say bye to a loved one before they die, as long as you showed them your affection daily and even if you didn't, the loved one knows that they were loved. That's all that's important. Also I recieved a poem called the rainbow bridge which is where the rainbow bridge line stems from.


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_guti BRONZE said...
on Nov. 4 2015 at 2:39 pm
_guti BRONZE, Plaquemine, Louisiana
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The phrase “We were inseparable, But you drifted,” struck a cord in my heart. I can relate to this poem because I lost someone dear to me.

on Nov. 4 2015 at 12:47 pm
courtneyp BRONZE, Plaquemine, Louisiana
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I love your poem because it reminds me of my grandfather that has left me. The line “I didn’t get to say goodbye” is my favorite line because I was never able to say goodbye to him. That feeling of being abandoned is one that I can easily relate to, and you did a great job putting that emotion out there!

on Nov. 3 2015 at 9:17 am
ElisaTheDuck ELITE, Rigaud, Other
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So sad and nostalgic...I love the feeling of this poem. I like how you leave it slightly vague and open to the reader so they don't know immediately that it's about your dog. Btw I'm so sorry that you lost her; I know how that feels. Amazing poem, keep up the great work!