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can i have this dance? MAG

October 26, 2015
By nicnery GOLD, Hong Kong, Other
nicnery GOLD, Hong Kong, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Do not think that you are as worthless as a white crayon, you just need to find someone who likes black paper"

the music tingles our spines
although we can hear nothing
but the dreams in our sparkling eyes
we dance side by side
inhaling the scent of who matters the most
the light glimmers above us
searching for the one
it lands on us
we notice nothing
as the light in our eyes
is bright enough
you whisper in my ear
“can i have this dance?”

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on May. 31 2016 at 6:02 pm
ambivalent SILVER, West Bend, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
everything in life is writable about if you have the outgoing guts to do it, and the imagination to improvise. the worst enemy to creativity is self-doubt. [sylvia plath]

this is absolutely lovely. reminds me of my first school dance :)

liv12345 said...
on Jan. 24 2016 at 3:27 am
nice poem!

FlameNight said...
on Jan. 20 2016 at 3:39 am
Wow! Amazing Work. Congrats on being put into the magazine!