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The Old House

October 20, 2015
By sushi2349 SILVER, Dunwoody, Georgia
sushi2349 SILVER, Dunwoody, Georgia
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Cut his strings and you'll be surprised he won't give up on standing ~Anonymous


Ah yes, I remember this photo. The good old days. Back when the squeaky floorboards and rotting wood were enough to scare the pants off anyone. We didn't need fake moaned with cheap plastic blood to jump out of a closet, or axe murderers with rusty masks. No, we didn't need any gimmicks. We were the proud old mansions on the top of the hill, where the clouds never left and the shivers you got weren't because of the constant wind. Where the shutters were creaking and falling off, and the front steps had holes where the wood had decayed. The house where children dared each other to spend the night, and made up tales of the grizzly deaths happening within. Where your flashlight went out the instant you stepped inside. Where the old furniture sent out clouds of dust that seemed to choke you. Where the dead scraggily trees scratched against the windows, every noise and image twisting in your mind, until you couldn't stand it anymore and you sprinted outside, screaming at the top of your lungs that there was something inside that spooky old house, right into your friends, who had been watching you the whole time. They'd call you a coward, and you'd walk away laughing, leaving the house on the hill behind you...those were the glory days.


The author's comments:

This started off as just a five minute free-write warmup at the beginning of class, but it quickly grew into so much more. Without a doubt, it's one of the most fun things I've ever written. How often do you get to write from the perspective of a creepy old house?


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