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I believe

October 7, 2015
By Anonymous


There is alot of believes in the world everybody you walk past have a thousand of believes know times it by 7 billion .          I believe I could fly without wings                      I believe people could fight death a win                      I believe I could be anything and everything        I believe a blue moon can be red          I believe belief can be the best thing that you can have        And an empty mind as the worst          Because B comes before E in the alphabet
And C before D             As if C was courage and D was disharmony.                       Someday I want to be the guy someone looks up too      Someday people will all look out for each other    Someday I will stand up for people          Someday the world will stop revolving around guns and destruction     Someday the world will start revolving around peace and harmony   Someday we will unite instead of hopping we don't cross paths     Someday I will be able to walk the streets of detroit free of thoughts of     getting robbed or shot           Someday people will not be afraid to help someone cross the scatched up and scuffed up  streets  And someday she will be mine          And one day he will come           Maybe,that's the day all of our wish will come true.                 Thank you god            Thank you mom            Thank you dad                      you stick with me through thick and thin        Thank you terry                    Thank you sister          Thank you friends           For letting me talk to you when no one else would listen      All of these people has been at my hand when I was down and they said “fall seven times, stand up eight” 


The author's comments:

 I changed structure of my poem to make it look like it makes more. I did not change to wording of the poem but only made it look better.I received all structural feedback.I did not  change the wording.I was thing to let every thought flow in to the poem.                    I changed my structure of the poem and changed some of the wording of the poem for the readers better understanding for the poem.


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