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August 9, 2015
By futurista12 ELITE, Far Rockaway, New York
futurista12 ELITE, Far Rockaway, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"And though she be but little, she is fierce."- Shakespeare


It's 5:15 now

PM

Exactly

5:15

And I'm beautiful

And I'm here

The way you want me to be

And you're not

The way I want you to be



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on Aug. 12 2015 at 10:56 am
futurista12 ELITE, Far Rockaway, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"And though she be but little, she is fierce."- Shakespeare

Thank you! Would you mind reading my poem entitled "Beautiful?" I'm really looking for critique on that one. Thanks!

Beila BRONZE said...
on Aug. 12 2015 at 3:15 am
Beila BRONZE, Palo Alto, California
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Favorite Quote:
"The coldest winter I ever spent was a summer in San Francisco." -Mark Twain

You have a way with words. This poem is real artistry--I love that last line. I could read this over and over again.


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