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Time, and the Sea

May 27, 2015
By winterwoods BRONZE, Irvine, California
winterwoods BRONZE, Irvine, California
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They say time is like the sea
But I wonder how could that be?
How could seconds compare to waves corroding shore
when time is new and the sea is a creature of old lore?
Rhythmic, lapping waves seem to beckon me.
Incessant, tapping ticks seem to discourage me.
The sea is like a lover whose sweet word haunts
whereas time is like a thief, taking what it wants.
To be enraptured by time, or enraptured by the seas
are two very different ways of suffering, to be.
For drowning in blue haze—
—Or wheezing with old age,
are irrefutably distinct fates, you see.
Yet still they say, time is like the sea.


The author's comments:

If you stand by the shoreline with your feet buried in the sand, there is the sensation of being pulled out to sea although you may not actually be moving. In the moments right before you drift to sleep, there is a similar sensation as you are torn from consciousness into dream land. This poem discusses the differences between the two. 


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