Safehaven | Teen Ink


April 19, 2015
By EvalynnHeather GOLD, Clemmons, North Carolina
EvalynnHeather GOLD, Clemmons, North Carolina
16 articles 4 photos 64 comments

With love you melt my heart,
The nightmares that make up my fears fall apart,
And something better falls in place,
A new life I now start.

Running from my dreamland,
You take my scarred hand,
And wipe the tears off of my face,
To keep me from falling back into quicksand.

Piece by piece we pick the glass from the walls,
And together watch the kingdom by the sea fall.
We watch the monsters and creatures run away,
And wish them good luck on their way to hell.

Using the rubies and emeralds and diamonds we build two new thrones,
One for the king so the queen doesn't reign alone.
I lift my chin to look at a new day,
And all of my hope is reborn.

You and me, hand in hand, create a better kingdom,
One that rises from the ashes of the burned demons that used to roam,
One that rises high into the skies,
Reaching my angels so they no longer mourn.

The angels and my love and I rejoice at the sight,
For we put up a fight,
We defeated the night,
And created a safehaven.

The author's comments:

A companion/sequel to my poem Dreamland

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on Mar. 17 2016 at 1:19 pm
EvalynnHeather GOLD, Clemmons, North Carolina
16 articles 4 photos 64 comments
Thank you so much! I will definitely work on that ;)

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on Sep. 17 2015 at 9:45 pm
Calum SILVER, Oshkosh, Wisconsin
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Nice! Very good sequel to dreamland, I like the contrast between the two. With a short middle piece you might be able to make both one poem!

on Sep. 9 2015 at 1:30 pm
DaughterOfDarkness3 PLATINUM, Gaston, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"You were given this life because you were strong enough to live it" - Unknown

This is beautiful! I wish I could write as well as you do. Keep writing and using your gift. You have no idea how often things like this can help people through a tough time.

on Aug. 25 2015 at 8:07 pm
EvalynnHeather GOLD, Clemmons, North Carolina
16 articles 4 photos 64 comments
thank you, that means a lot to me :)

on Jun. 5 2015 at 1:40 pm
Allen. PLATINUM, Palo Alto, California
32 articles 9 photos 525 comments

Favorite Quote:
[i]No matter how much people try to put you down or make you think other things about yourself, the only person you can trust about who you really are is you[/i] -Crusher-P

This somehow feels very relatable, even though it's so fantastic... You have a great gift for words.