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Whispers in Oblivion

April 9, 2015
By Anonymous

Can I whisper to you before we sink into oblivion?

Whispers of secrets we never would have shared in the light.

Whispers of hidden fears and trodden down loves?

Stories of drama and horror?

Adventures of joy and woe?

...

Will you be my confidant, my friend, as we lay in near silence... Our gentle breathing and whispered secrets the only sound that stirs the night air?

Will you listen as I tell you things the sunlight will never shine on and pass some of yours on to me?

Will you share that moment so close to sleep with me?

That teetering mooment that rests on the edge of dreams... on the the wings of stars... and the edge of oblivion...?


The author's comments:

This is about... well I know my meaning, how I randomly get deep right beofre I fall asleep. One second I'll be like texting someone yeah tacos sounds cool in a brithish accent next im confessing my love to them or something... but it doesn't have to be that. I picture two people out in a field. Not meaning to fall asleep, not anything happening just that beutiful moment right before you are lost to the world.


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on Apr. 13 2015 at 12:03 am
Yes, daughter of water I agree it's kinda of rythmic I really like it I want to here more by you author girl ps like ur page haha

on Apr. 13 2015 at 12:01 am
Huh, I like the way this sounds. Your right. I see the people in the field but mine are more in the long grass close to the ocean and waves crash softly in the backround