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All I Need Is a Friend MAG

January 28, 2009
By Ryan Moran BRONZE, Mt. Prospect, Illinois
Ryan Moran BRONZE, Mt. Prospect, Illinois
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Books fill up my room.
Not baseball cards,
or pictures of girls,
or basketballs.
Maybe a blown up picture of …
… Pam Anderson might help.

Black-framed glasses
and a white,
pale,
lanky
body.
I should start working out.

At least I can read.
I read four books a day last summer.
The librarian,
80-year-old Mrs. Woodsworth,
she knows my middle name.
If only I had a real friend.
I am sick of seeing her old,
bony,
pale body.
Although it resembles mine.

The kids at school laugh.
Is it the way I dress?
Lacoste,
Ralph Lauren,
La Tigre.
I’ve tried every designer out there.
Staying in the house really saves me money.
My stupid rich parents give me $50 a week for lunch.
$50 times 36 weeks …
what is that?
$1,000,
$2,000,
$10,000?
I should probably know.
Straight A’s 12 years in a row
and counting.

With all of this,
or none of this –
it depends how you look at it –
all I need is a friend.



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on Jun. 15 2011 at 3:57 pm
SuperPanda409 SILVER, State College, Pennsylvania
9 articles 1 photo 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
If this is love I don&#039;t wanna be loved.- Get Scared<br /> <br /> &lrm;We are made of love and all the beauty stemming from it. We are made of love and every fracture caused by the lack of it.- Sleeping At Last

Dear Ryan, 

There are so many wonderful people out there who would love to be your friend. I know I would. Don't let those mean comments put you down. They just can't quite see the beauty of what you write. Here I'll leave you with this:

The simmered whisper

Of his poem in my ears

Almost brings my heart to tears

It rips apart what I once wore

A mask of friendship

Nothing more

Today I swear will be the day

I talk to somebody 

I would usually disregard

His poem showed me and open heart

 

Did you like it? 

If you'd like to talk more reply to this. I loved your work.

Much Heart,

Madison


renni SILVER said...
on Jun. 15 2011 at 9:08 am
renni SILVER, Crete, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
Sometimes, that girl who seems so strong, who never lets what people say bother her, who smiles and laughs with her friends all the time, is really the girl who, deep down, is falling to pieces.

this was so great i absolutly love it =D

gleek1234 GOLD said...
on Jun. 14 2011 at 1:50 pm
gleek1234 GOLD, Burlington, Vermont
17 articles 0 photos 130 comments

Favorite Quote:
You did let me go you left me broken and heartless, crying out for help, with no one to answer my calls-Shilpa Pierpont-Hale ( poem) Love hurts

ok you guys don't know good poetry. ur mean rude and have know life. so stop

on Jun. 13 2011 at 5:21 pm
Plethora BRONZE, Austin, Texas
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I can totally relate! I love the structure of your stanzas.

on Jun. 11 2011 at 12:25 am
joyfuldancer SILVER, Easton, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
I&#039;m not a perfect person, I&#039;m a forgiven person.

Such a beautiful explosion of emotion.  And if u need a friend, I'm always here.  God bless.

on Jun. 6 2011 at 3:43 pm
R5andParamore BRONZE, Manalapan, New Jersey
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I REALLy hope you can't relate to this, it's so sad! You are a beautiful writer, please take pride in that. :)

mrittmritt77 said...
on Jun. 5 2011 at 1:09 pm
I really love your writing style (: haha I would be your friend :)

on Jun. 4 2011 at 11:21 am
RanaHewezi1998 SILVER, Ames, Iowa
5 articles 0 photos 63 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;I may not have gone where I intended to go, but I think I&#039;ve ended up where I needed to be.&quot;<br /> -Douglas Adams

awwwww this made me realize how thankful i am to have a friend beside me all times :)

on Jun. 2 2011 at 6:08 pm
Alybuggg BRONZE, Vinton, Vermont
1 article 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
A man sooner or later discovers that he is the master-gardener of his soul, the director of his life.<br /> ~James Allen~

I loved your poem! :) It's great, it actually made me tear up. That's how you know you have real emotion in it...because you're reader can feel the emotions you are feeling. Anyway I loved it!!

on Jun. 2 2011 at 11:44 am
lovelele BRONZE, Burtom, Michigan
2 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
love the ones who love you love the ones who hate you because either way it goes youre gonna need them

i need a real friend too

on Jun. 1 2011 at 7:39 pm
mockingbirdmaggie BRONZE, Greenwood, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;It is better to be hated for who you are then loved for who you pretend to be.&quot; Psychic Travis Sanders

Ryan I love that line maybe a picture of Pamela Anderson might help! Keep writing you're amazing!

on May. 31 2011 at 6:01 pm
JojoMimi BRONZE, Portland, Oregon
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Wow. This is great. I loved the feeling. Awesome work!

on May. 28 2011 at 9:59 am
Insert_Username_Here BRONZE, Griffin, Georgia
1 article 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;I&#039;d rather be hated for who I am, than loved for who I am not.&quot;--Kurt Cobain

This is amazing. I really liked it a lot. (:

on May. 26 2011 at 11:15 am
Rinilove32 SILVER, Boise, Idaho
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this poem is very intruiging.

i like your style of writing(:

there is alot of feeling in this poem!


on May. 25 2011 at 11:25 pm
PixieDoll2698, Wood Dale, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
too many people spend money they don&#039;t have on products they don&#039;t need to impress people they don&#039;t like- unknown

great article!! (:

on May. 25 2011 at 4:15 pm
LanaBabii BRONZE, Cocoa, Florida
2 articles 25 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Oh, you hate your job? Why didn&#039;t you say so? There&#039;s a support group for that. It&#039;s called EVERYBODY, and they meet at the bar.&rdquo;

i will be your friend. haha, this is great.

jamikim BRONZE said...
on May. 25 2011 at 3:52 pm
jamikim BRONZE, Sterling, Illinois
2 articles 1 photo 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
the only thing holding yourself back is you.

i really love this poem! great job :)

on May. 25 2011 at 3:08 pm
EyesofBlueFire GOLD, Belleville, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;We are only as strong as we are united, as weak as we are divided.&quot; Dumbledore, Harry Potter, J.K. Rowling.

I really liked this poem, I can connect to it, and it's beautifully written. :) Feel free to check out my stuff too.

on May. 25 2011 at 2:25 pm
SuperSami97 BRONZE, Urbandale, Iowa
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Wow!  Very good.  Maybe add some more about the person you are looking for and then wrap it up with how you just really want a friend.  It might make this even more personal and touch the reader in a deeper way.

TeresaL said...
on May. 25 2011 at 11:20 am
TeresaL,
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yea that is deep