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Separated by a Facade

March 11, 2015
By LoloG SILVER, Highlands Ranch, Colorado
LoloG SILVER, Highlands Ranch, Colorado
9 articles 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Becoming fearless isn't the point. That's impossible. It's learning how to control your fear, and to be free from it." -Veronica Roth


Dancing the night away
Downing shots and martinis
Nobody can see
Past her false facade
Into her yearning soul

Punching and kicking
Enclosed in a ring
With cheering and bets
No one can see
The heart that strains for another

Hiding beneath artificial skins
They brush side by side
Not knowing that beneath their cover ups
Their hearts beat as one
Never to be joined



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LoloG SILVER said...
on Mar. 16 2015 at 8:27 pm
LoloG SILVER, Highlands Ranch, Colorado
9 articles 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Becoming fearless isn't the point. That's impossible. It's learning how to control your fear, and to be free from it." -Veronica Roth

Thank you for the advice

on Mar. 15 2015 at 7:04 pm
Allen. PLATINUM, Palo Alto, California
32 articles 9 photos 525 comments

Favorite Quote:
[i]No matter how much people try to put you down or make you think other things about yourself, the only person you can trust about who you really are is you[/i] -Crusher-P

Very interesting. I like the abstract concepts here and the word choice. Again, I think you should let the words flow rather than making them in block paragraphs.