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Unicorns

March 11, 2015
By ArminKitty BRONZE, Okley, California
ArminKitty BRONZE, Okley, California
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Our love is like a diamond

Bright and beautiful

Our love is like a bird

Soaring free without boundaries

Our love is like Mary Poppins

Practically perfect in every way

Our love is like a fantasy

So magical and mysterious

Our love is like a unicorn

Unicorns don't exist


The author's comments:

being a fan of fictional characters


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on Mar. 12 2015 at 8:33 pm
Allen. PLATINUM, Palo Alto, California
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Favorite Quote:
[i]No matter how much people try to put you down or make you think other things about yourself, the only person you can trust about who you really are is you[/i] -Crusher-P

I like the idea, but it feels a bit cliche, like you got some of these from places online rather than thinking of them yourself. I feel as though I've heard the last line somewhere especially. But I do like the overall feel you have going here. I think you should write more.