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Who am I?

January 24, 2015
By SCSKATE SILVER, Austin, Texas
9 articles 5 photos 23 comments

I pluck her smile
I force his laugh
I copy their style
I scribble my words
who am I?

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on Mar. 3 2015 at 11:44 pm
kikixkupkake GOLD, San Marcos, California
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Favorite Quote:
"The things that walk out when we open our minds." -Dylan McCoy

This is deathly short, but still amusing. I'd really love to see how this poem would turn out if you extended your thoughts on the topic. Overall, it's an interesting little piece, and it does a great job in the short lines it has.

Ana143 GOLD said...
on Feb. 23 2015 at 7:56 pm
Ana143 GOLD, Bolivar, Ohio
17 articles 4 photos 64 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Your always beautiful in my eyes"
"Be who you are not what someone else wants you to be"

This is diffrent, It makes you think some. Nice!

on Feb. 23 2015 at 4:53 pm
WOWriting SILVER, Broadstairs, Other
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Another intriguing short poem. Liking the metaphor 'i pluck her smile', creates a wonderfully sinister image. Too short for me again, extend your thoughts. Thats just my personal opinion though.