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May the Odds Be Ever in Your Favor

January 13, 2015
By renees BRONZE, ROCHESTER, Michigan
renees BRONZE, ROCHESTER, Michigan
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A woman has a 1 in 262,365 chance
Of being killed by a shark.
Seven days set aside for awareness—


Movies expose the horrors of being in the wrong place
at the wrong time.
An honest mistake—
The shark thought she was a seal


A woman has a 1 in 6 chance
Of being raped.
Not a day for prevention—
Just mornings of ill-placed self-hatred and nights inundated with trepidation


We prevent justice by pressing half the population with illusions of entitlement:
“boys will be boys”
“she was asking for it”


There is a 1 in 6 chance
She will be in the wrong place at the wrong time.
She “should have known” swimming was safer than walking:
An “honest mistake”—
He thought her hemline was consent


The author's comments:

“May the Odds Be Ever in Your Favor” is cathartic for me.  The prevalence of Rape Culture is overwhelming, and exponentially radiates through ignorance perpetuated by our society’s acceptance of everyday sexism as a way of life and exploiting gender stereotypes.  I learned in Psychology that our fears are usually ill-placed (you are more likely to die from a car accident than any sort of airplane related death, yet most people don’t clap once they’ve parked the car safely), and realized sharks are endangered, but a large percent of the population refuses to dip their toes in salt water in case of a shark attack.  In class, we studied how understatement, irony, and diction can compliment each other to create a stronger tone than “not good.”  The statistics of sexual assault are almost unbelievable, so comparing those to the statistics of shark attacks was ironic itself.  The parallel structure of our fears supported by how we view them defines the critical and solemn tone.  I used the title, “May the Odds Be Ever in Your Favor” as an allusion to The Hunger Games, which is a series about a dystopian society that crumbles apart as a female hero saves the country.  This also symbolically speaks to the ensuing realization of the backwards priorities of our current society.


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Zjea100 SILVER said...
on Jan. 15 2015 at 4:48 pm
Zjea100 SILVER, Tacoma, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
Tell me, what is it you plan to do with your one wild and precious life?

This is such a great messgae...thank you.