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revision of a lost soul
The midnight moon,
the restless rustling leaves,
the crunch beneath my feet.
The razor in my hands.
the cold presence of the Autumn night
only clears my mind.
the nightmare of losing you
not no Annabelle lee but my sweet
dear you.
You amazing Arizona- Californian boy,
you make my brown eyes
hazel.
No clear eyes,
no direction.
I was blinded by the 'aw' of what seemed to be love.
not knowing what was next,
you swept me off my feet
and then dropped me a hundred more.
the trust,
no more,
the yearn for love still awaits.
But i cannot trust.
But please god let this razor revive me.

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i was young, dumb, and now im growing but my heartache has too.
i also alluded in my poem to edgar allen poes famous poem annabelle lee. i also said " you swept me off my feet and dropped me a hundred more, inquiring that the boy amazed me and the broke my heart as if he had brought me up on stair and then pushed me down 100 more. he brought life back to me but in a couple text messages he set me back further than before.