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revision of a lost soul

November 25, 2014
By pandastar BRONZE, Shiprock, New Mexico
pandastar BRONZE, Shiprock, New Mexico
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Favorite Quote:
you only know you when your truly writing what you really are.


The midnight moon,

the restless rustling leaves,

the crunch beneath my feet.

The razor in my hands.

the cold presence of the Autumn night

only clears my mind.

the nightmare of losing you

not no Annabelle lee but my sweet

dear you.

You amazing Arizona- Californian boy,

you make my brown eyes

hazel.

No clear eyes,

no direction.

I was blinded by the 'aw' of what seemed to be love.

not knowing what was next,

you swept me off my feet

and then dropped me a hundred more.

the trust,

no more,

the yearn for love still awaits.

But i cannot trust.

But please god let this razor revive me.     


The author's comments:

i was young, dumb, and now im growing but my heartache has too.

i also alluded in my poem to edgar allen poes famous poem annabelle lee. i also said " you swept me off my feet and dropped me a hundred more, inquiring that the boy amazed me and the broke my heart as if he had brought me up on stair and then pushed me down 100 more. he brought life back to me but in a couple text messages he set me back further than before.


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