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Time...

November 18, 2014
By Abi-street GOLD, Birmingham, Other
Abi-street GOLD, Birmingham, Other
17 articles 0 photos 27 comments

Favorite Quote:
Try to be a rainbow in someone’s cloud. - Maya Angelou


Time solves everything,
But not everything has time to be solved.

Each day time passes by,
But time will never die.

The tick-tock of a clock,
Won’t be hushed when we stop.

Time will carry on,
Even if your time has gone…
 



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on Dec. 19 2014 at 3:13 am
Abi-street GOLD, Birmingham, Other
17 articles 0 photos 27 comments

Favorite Quote:
Try to be a rainbow in someone’s cloud. - Maya Angelou

thank you :)

on Dec. 17 2014 at 10:45 am
guard-girl GOLD, Clover, South Carolina
10 articles 11 photos 147 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Trust in the Lord with all your heart, and do not depend on your own understanding. Seek His will in all you do, and he will show you which path to take."
Proverbs 3:5-6

This is amazing! I have been trying to best characterize time for a while, and you captured it perfectly! It is really descriptive, and it paints a picture for the reader! I love it! :)

on Nov. 21 2014 at 11:50 am
Abi-street GOLD, Birmingham, Other
17 articles 0 photos 27 comments

Favorite Quote:
Try to be a rainbow in someone’s cloud. - Maya Angelou

thank you so much for your kindness :) im really happy you liked it 

on Nov. 21 2014 at 11:42 am
Abi-street GOLD, Birmingham, Other
17 articles 0 photos 27 comments

Favorite Quote:
Try to be a rainbow in someone’s cloud. - Maya Angelou

thank you so much .. i'm really glad you liked it :)

on Nov. 21 2014 at 10:28 am
Nightingale74 PLATINUM, Beavercreek, Ohio
46 articles 0 photos 152 comments

Favorite Quote:
"When you need something to believe in, believe in yourself."
"A poem unwritten is only a thought; unshared, unsaid..."

This is a wonderful poem, Abi :) You expressed some very unique and thoughtful ways of viewing time. I loved it!!! Thanks for posting!!! :D can't wait to read more of your work :)

on Nov. 21 2014 at 10:26 am
authoress17 SILVER, Evans City, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"If there is no such thing as magic...then what is writing?."-authoress17 (me)

Wow, amazing poem. I love the first line. "Times solves everything, But not everything has time to be solved." That is so true and it just hit me. Your poem really made me think. Great job! I think this will impact your readers greatly.