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Shooting star.

November 13, 2014
By Abi-street GOLD, Birmingham, Other
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Abi-street GOLD, Birmingham, Other
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Try to be a rainbow in someone’s cloud. - Maya Angelou

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I wish upon this shooting star,
That you will be okay,
Today and forever.

I wish upon this little flower,
That you will be stronger,
Within this hour.

I pray to god and all ears that hear,
You’ll be forever my true love,
My one.
My dear.

© Rosanna S., Phoenix, AZ

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Abi-street GOLD said...
on Nov. 21 2014 at 12:02 pm
Abi-street GOLD, Birmingham, Other
17 articles 0 photos 27 comments

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Try to be a rainbow in someone’s cloud. - Maya Angelou

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thanks a lot :)
ansem_unlimited PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 20 2014 at 11:41 am
ansem_unlimited PLATINUM, Frederick, Maryland
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Thou may think of me as desired, to idolize or villanize me whichever you may choose. but gaze upon me and thou sall not see the husk of a man! for all my sins and all my bliss, i am anything but hollow
-Ansem_Unlimited

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quaint & elagent...
Abi-street GOLD said...
on Nov. 17 2014 at 9:09 am
Abi-street GOLD, Birmingham, Other
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Try to be a rainbow in someone’s cloud. - Maya Angelou

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thankyou :)
CNBono17 SILVER said...
on Nov. 17 2014 at 8:51 am
CNBono17 SILVER, Rural, South Carolina
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I like this. Your style is simple, but profound. Your use of imagery to convey your message is the same. Nice work:) Keep it up