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To be Successful

October 8, 2014
By Tyreef BRONZE, Oak Park, Michigan
Tyreef BRONZE, Oak Park, Michigan
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I want to be successful,
I live and desire to
Be successful
I dream of a life of
Riches’ fill my desire…
I cannot live without
Being successful –
Comes with happiness
The feeling to know
Your life wasn’t wasted
Is amazing
To live life
Rich
Stress free
Family oriented
With no regrets, Now that
That is success
In Tyree’s poem he centered his wording towards the left. He did this because it is much easier to read and see his picture. He changes it from being centered down the middle as that is used for poets who just start their poetry career. He also discusses within the poem that success is his main goal in life. He somewhat gives a definition of what he calls success. He also cuts out words throughout the poem.



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