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Back Bending Coaster

October 2, 2014
By Zakary Martens BRONZE, Clarkston, Michigan
Zakary Martens BRONZE, Clarkston, Michigan
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As i look around i see the thrill
Seeking about,
I jump out of the car, i can smell the aroma,
French fries and popcorn the sweetness of the butter,
I could just taste it.
I was overwhelmed with excitement.
I want to rush but i have to wait
for my family was behind, it felt like they were meaning to do this,
Finally we could go, Ii dash
My family beside me we were about to reach the entry gate.
“YES” Ii yell as we go inside, we were about to have the time of our lives!

Me and my family rush to the first coaster we see, the corkscrew.
I feel my mouth bend down with a grin i was about to ride my first roller coaster,
we get in line,
a small line only a 15 minute wait
It felt like hours but we patiently made it,
Ii grasp the cold bar, it was cold and hard.
I looked up and with a slight squeal the bars opened, I was ready!

I get on the ride, Ii ask my dad “will this be scary”
He replies “no” but Ii had no idea what Ii was about to do.
The lady comes by asked “are you ready”?
I reply “yea” with a scared grin on my face, Was Ii ready
or not, was Ii about to die?
FLASH, Ii look up we were going up the hill, cling clank,
slowly we climb up the hill.
Wwe turn to the right i look down, one peak at my dad while
He's grinning at me,
We fly down the hill Ii try to scream but I,im so scared Ii couldnt.
Ii look ahead there were two corkscrews,
I brace myself and we fly right through them,
Up down up down, Ii look was it over? It was over!
As we get off Ii grin for Ii was ready to ride anything!



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DerpDerpDerp said...
on Oct. 8 2014 at 3:44 pm
THIS IS AWESOME, this is a pretty cool story, it reminds me of when i want to ceder point :)