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Which Hat Should I Wear To Church?

October 2, 2014
By Niyaroo PLATINUM, Colonial Beach, Virginia
Niyaroo PLATINUM, Colonial Beach, Virginia
31 articles 4 photos 69 comments

Today's Sunday.

Time to pick out my church outfit.

 

I open my closet door and start

looking for a hat to match my outfit.

I keep those hats in a special box

called "Sunday Church Hats".

 

I find two that'll make me look good:

a yellow sun hat that'll make me look like a

bright happy person, topped with a 

beautiful white flower for extra radiance;

 

Or maybe I'll wear my white and blue hat.

People always say I look like I'm on

cloud 9 wearing it.

 

I don't know.  What do you think?

Which hat should I wear to church?


The author's comments:

Some Christians go to church wearing "mood hats".  They'll go to church acting sweet, even with their siblings and always smiling until they get home. Then, they're a totally different person...It shouldn't be like that. Be who you say you are.  Actions speak louder than words.


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on Nov. 5 2014 at 8:37 am
Literature_Darling GOLD, Warrenton, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"To live is the rarest thing of all. Most people exsist and that is all." ~Oscar Wilde
"I am a writer quite by accident, the way one my fall and rip a hole in their jeans." ~Blogger H. B. Sachs

I like the idea behind this poem; the childlike voice in the writing. However, I do agree with a few other comments. As I read I longed for more metaphorical language. But it really was lovely.

on Oct. 12 2014 at 4:06 pm
Niyaroo PLATINUM, Colonial Beach, Virginia
31 articles 4 photos 69 comments
Okay. Thank you for the advice :)

on Oct. 12 2014 at 2:52 pm
Angelique_h GOLD, Bradenton, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"We cry, not because we are weak, but because we have been strong for too long."

I like the idea behind the poem but I think it would be better if you had kept it shorter, inserted more metaphorical language, and got your point across more without the caption because when I first read it I was confused on the meaning behind it.

on Oct. 6 2014 at 4:57 pm
Niyaroo PLATINUM, Colonial Beach, Virginia
31 articles 4 photos 69 comments
Thank you :)

on Oct. 6 2014 at 4:34 pm
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
To love is to be vulnerable; Triumph is born out of struggle; We notice shadows most when they stand alone in the midst of overwhelming light.

That is so true. So true. I agree with you. Thank you much, for teaching me this and sharing this. You really have a talent and greatness in you. Never forget that. You are a amazing and wonderful and talented writer and person. :) Thank you so much, for sharignt this. :)