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i TRY

September 29, 2014
By jalen miller BRONZE, Oakpark, Michigan
jalen miller BRONZE, Oakpark, Michigan
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How high can I go 

I try
and I try
but
I
Keep on failing

They told me to give up!
                 but
                   I
               Will not
I try and I try. I finally got
                      A
                   dunk

I keep on practicing and I get it
ever time now. It’s time                                                                                             
for
me

I will
Never
Stop!

Poetic Device
My poetic Device was longer and shorter lines.
My other Poetic Device was my feelings and thoughts.
My other Poetic Device was riming.

Writer’s Strategies
My Strategies was my line brakes.
              My other was white spaces.
                                      And motivation.
 



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