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Withering Away

September 29, 2014
By Artemis.Roe PLATINUM, Marysville, Michigan
Artemis.Roe PLATINUM, Marysville, Michigan
43 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Well-behaved women seldom make history" ---Eleanor Roosevelt
"A man of words and not deeds is like a garden full of weeds." ~~Anonymous


I sit there,
across the room,
watching him wither away,
I try to talk to him,
tell him he’s wrong,
that needs to stop,
but he won’t listen,
won’t give the time of day

I watch him laugh,
but I know that laugh,
it will be gone much too soon,
because here I sit watching him wither away,
and he wont give me the time of day,
just to try and save him.

I see the signs,
and I know they’re there,
he just wont stop,
says he’s fine,
but I know
he’s withering away.

in my ears,
I hear the faraway tears,
the ones that they all will cry,
on the day,
he fully withers away.

I try once more,
hoping that,
with god by my side,
he’ll listen,
but he just walks away,
he won’t listen,
he doesn't care,
and sadly,
I know,
he’s withering away...


The author's comments:

Just a random thought that came to me about a friend of mine, he does drugs, which is the cause of him withering away. its a slow and sadly painless process, but its happening, and he may not like me, or want to talk to me, but i care for him, this is about all that...


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on Oct. 7 2014 at 8:07 am
Artemis.Roe PLATINUM, Marysville, Michigan
43 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Well-behaved women seldom make history" ---Eleanor Roosevelt
"A man of words and not deeds is like a garden full of weeds." ~~Anonymous

thank you, i will keep writing, but as i said, he just wont listen to me, he's too far gone for help. but again i say thank you again, feel free to look at some of my other works :)

on Oct. 6 2014 at 4:32 pm
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
81 articles 5 photos 1486 comments

Favorite Quote:
To love is to be vulnerable; Triumph is born out of struggle; We notice shadows most when they stand alone in the midst of overwhelming light.

Wow. This is beautifl, raw, amazing and sad too. I hope your friend is okay. You really do have a talent and greatness in you, because you do. You're a amazing writer and person. Thank you so much, for sharing your heart.