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Big Brother

September 22, 2014
By Anonymous

A year... One year... It's so short, but so long...

In one year I'll see my brother again.

I've missed him so much.

I wonder how he has changed.

How has the Marine Corps changed him?

Will he still be the same or completely changed?

I don't care, as long as I see him... I'll be fine.

I miss him so much.

 

And when the time comes for us to be reunited, it's such an interesting experience. 

His face is rock solid. No smile, no emotion.

Wow, I'm impressed.

I don't hug him for as long as I want to, he moves on to someone else. 

I wish he knew how much I love him, I wish we were closer.

I wish he were nicer.

I wish the Marine Corps changed him. Made him loving.

I wish he were kind...


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on Sep. 25 2014 at 3:38 pm
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
To love is to be vulnerable; Triumph is born out of struggle; We notice shadows most when they stand alone in the midst of overwhelming light.

I'm sorry. :( Sometimes that happens, but I dislike it when that happens to me or other people. You poem is amazing and wonderful, yet at the same time rather sad. It has so much emotion and you and your brother; if this makes any sense at all; you put yourself into it when you wrote your poem. It's just that amazing. Maybe you should show it to him, but this is entirely up to you. Thank you so muhc, for sharing this. You really do have a talent and greatness in you, because you do.