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Iradel

August 18, 2014
By ImmortalRose GOLD, Arvada, Colorado
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Your pain is the breaking of the shell that encloses your understanding.<br /> Khalil Gibran

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Iradel
the eyes
the flowing hair
the ocean of blue
the suns golden rays
my little one
my darling
my impossible child

So in love
though nothings there
Just my heart
beating the days by
believing with all my heart
That my little Iradel
is on her way

and then the day comes
heart broken into
million scattered pieces

© Kaelee L., Petersburg, MI

The author's comments:
So this summer I got very sick. Oddly enough I had many of the symptoms of a pregnant lady. So naturally that lead to me being pregnant. (though I certainly was not) I fell in love with Iradel, as I named her. And called her my impossible child. (As I knew immaculate conception was impossible)However, in some strange way I believed my little Iradel would come. And when I got an ultrasound to find NO BABY... I was heartbroken. So this is to Iradel... My impossible baby.

Also, sorry it's not my best writing... for some reason it just wouldn't flow. :(
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11399230 BRONZE said...
on Aug. 26 2018 at 11:30 pm
11399230 BRONZE, Las Vegas, Nevada
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Iradel's story (and name!) is so beautiful.
ImmortalRose GOLD said...
on Sep. 21 2014 at 11:32 pm
ImmortalRose GOLD, Arvada, Colorado
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Your pain is the breaking of the shell that encloses your understanding.<br /> Khalil Gibran

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Thasnk you again!
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND said...
on Sep. 21 2014 at 3:58 pm
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
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So sad. Yet beautifully written. Thank you for sharing this. You have such a talent.