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Passing Time

June 13, 2014
By TommyB7 BRONZE, Westwood, Massachusetts
TommyB7 BRONZE, Westwood, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"Be so Happy that When Others Look at You they Become Happy Too"


Passing Time

A never-ending accumulation

of all emotions,
of all memories,

that distinguishes
present actions
to previous thoughts...

a gap in the middle, a gap
that everyday we
float through,
pass over,

to travel back and
relive our past
at a time
when it was once
our present.

Our past
leaves behind
imaginations,
that to us,
are the richest
of pleasures.

Choosing what to
remember,
relive,
cherish,
rewriting your past to something you
enjoy,
want to recreate.

The past gives that freedom,
creates a
world
with no limits,
where we look back and realize
what it was like
to feel the way
we once did.

We notice
bad moments
becoming
joy,
tedium
becoming
triumph.
Each struggle,
making us stronger.

We revisit rote repetitions
with a different outlook,
now seeing,
the pride in success,
comfort in safety,
enthusiasm in learning.
We grow,
but need to
look back,
reflect on our past.

Because time
by itself,
is nothing.
We give it
our own value,
by growing
our memories,
and adding
to our life.
Making our time


special.


The author's comments:
I was initially inspired to write this piece as part of a school assignment with the task being to describe the memory of emotion. My class and I were preparing to read "The Giver" and in order to understand the book we first, had to understand the complexity of memories and how they create vivid emotions. My first draft of the piece focused strongly on reflection, but as I revised I realized that while reflecting on the past is important, so is the enjoying the present. I tried to symbolize that evolving present by adding one more line to each stanza, showing that time is never-ending. I hope readers will get out of it what I have given to my future myself as advice: cherish every moment in your life, make it special.

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