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a place that resides in my soul

June 13, 2014
By staryskies GOLD, Siteki, Other
staryskies GOLD, Siteki, Other
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in the waters within me
in the water i can see
my reflection.
some distraction. some thrown stone
chills my heart and shakes my bones
as it distorts and blurs my reflection
what i see
of me.
almost inevitability,to my soul
and not to my mind,
it comes back to view when i still
the winds that blow.
but i control the wave which i will surf ad the wind that will blow
in me.
there a colors in these waters
my emotions are their potters
molding them and saturating them making
them vivid and alive.
thank you pain for showing me,
thank you wind for blowing me
because it is only by that I came to truly see
in this mysterious place i know that resides in me.
that only i know and see.

The author's comments:
after many changes, temporary situations that tried to compressed the years and process into few words of unknowing and deceitful judgement come deeper into myself. we overcome things we believe are impossible to come through,who are we after that? we didn't know ourselves enough to know that we could overcome.

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This article has 4 comments.

on Sep. 30 2014 at 6:34 am
staryskies GOLD, Siteki, Other
14 articles 0 photos 27 comments
Thank you very much :) It's much appreciated!

on Sep. 29 2014 at 7:14 am
TheComet PLATINUM, Mostaganem, Other
22 articles 1 photo 439 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Speak when you are angry and you will make the best speech you will ever regret" -Ambrose Bierce
" Be yourself! Everybody else is already taken ;)"
"Don't go where the path leads you. Go instead where there's no path and leave a trail ;)"-R.W.Emerson

That is really sweet. It's so deep and poetic. I can relate to it in some ways ^_^ I would only recommand some grammar and spelling check, but there are inly few so don't worry about it ;) you're really good. You have potential. Keep it up and you'll get better day after day ;) Definitely 5 stars :D Thanks for sharing this.

on Jul. 16 2014 at 5:18 am
staryskies GOLD, Siteki, Other
14 articles 0 photos 27 comments
oh wow,Thanks Alot,i appreciate you taking the time :))

on Jul. 15 2014 at 10:58 am
Olivia-Atlet ELITE, Dardenne Prairie, Missouri
325 articles 10 photos 1165 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To these the past hath its phantoms,
More real than solid earth;
And to these death does not mean decay,
But only another birth"
- Isabella Banks

This is very deep and beautiful! Keep up this wonderful work, it really touches my heart. ^_^