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Beginning To Bloom

June 11, 2014
By iDani-iBeauty SILVER, Chicago, Illinois
iDani-iBeauty SILVER, Chicago, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
- Failure Is Only The Opportunity To Begin Again, Only This Time More Wisely
- Henry Ford -

I see you
My stomach is filled with butterflies
My mind is empty
I have nothing to say
As you decide to walk my way
My timid petals began to bloom
In the warmth of your ray
Maybe I should say good morning
Though its so cliche
I feel your warmth become more of a blaze
And suddenly I feel the need to speak
Or at least just a wave
Then your blaze burst into flames
And I manage to forget my own name
But this a chance of a lifetime
I can't let you walk away
And in a split second decision
I grin and say

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on Jun. 28 2014 at 12:01 pm
WinterRose76 SILVER, Ok., Florida
6 articles 6 photos 183 comments

Favorite Quote:
Arise and be all that you dream - Flyleaf

Cute poem! I found it easily relatable and enjoyable to read. You left a few tiny words out like "is" in "this a chance", but that's the only thing I could find. Great job! 5/5

on Jun. 15 2014 at 5:36 pm
Luv4Ever SILVER, Jacksonville, Florida
7 articles 0 photos 199 comments

Favorite Quote:
A miracle is just another name for hard work
-Minho in "To The Beautiful You"

This a fabulous that I can hardly criticize