April 29, 2014
By MynaJane1234 GOLD, Greenfield, Ohio
MynaJane1234 GOLD, Greenfield, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"luke 6:31 ( Do to others as you would have them do to you)


why do you do the things you do?

Why do you have to hurt me like that,

what did i ever do to you?

Im so tired of of all this hurt and

pain inside.

I want to let it out and be myself

let me shine.

but i cant because im scared of what people will think of me.

Im trying to come out and be what i call is real but i cant im so scared.

I dont know why but i know you feel it too,

all the pain that builds up insied of you.

You sometimes do stupid thngs to hide the pain.

but you only end up making it worse.

have you have you ever felt this pain?

Why,why do we have this pain i just want to run and hide.

I feel like everytime i get close to someone they turn away,

i dont know maybe im not the same i just want to do something with my life to not be the same

If you understand any of this please let me know

The author's comments:
I wroe this becuse i know a lot of teens out there is in pain and feeling the questions always there why? so i wanted to just let you guys know your not alone.

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on Jun. 20 2014 at 9:14 pm
Poetintraining BRONZE, La Mesa, California
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Pretty good poem. The grammer needs work, but I understand the feeling that you are trying to portray here.

on May. 14 2014 at 3:55 pm
MynaJane1234 GOLD, Greenfield, Ohio
14 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
"luke 6:31 ( Do to others as you would have them do to you)

Thanks Shade3043 it really means a lot :)

on May. 14 2014 at 3:50 pm
Shade3043 DIAMOND, Shade3043 Did This, In Case Of Anonymous, Other
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Favorite Quote:
When I was a boy, I would always hear scary things in the news and my mother would say to me, "Always look for the helpers. Everywhere you look you will always find people helping." - Fred Rogers

Good for a first poem! I like they way that you made so that some teens can indeed relate to it, but I think it can be better. The grammar is a bit off at times, and the imagery is eeehhhhh, but I still like it, for a first poem. Keep on writing, and I'm sure that you'll get better and better. 3/5 Stars.

on May. 13 2014 at 8:53 pm
Sherlocklives SILVER, Mnt. Marion, New York
5 articles 15 photos 29 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Among them, not of them" ~Lord Byron

"I may be on the side of the angels, but don't think for one second that I *am* one of them." ~Sherlock

Awe this is so sweet <3

AmericaniumJ said...
on May. 13 2014 at 8:05 pm
AmericaniumJ, Eureka, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
Though she be but little, she is fierce!

I really like this poem. I love how I can connect to it!