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soul MAG
November 27, 2008
i took
the half empty glass
of my
soul
and held it out to you
poured it into your lap
when all i wanted to do was
hide
but then i looked up
and realized that maybe
it was not as
important
as i thought
because you were turned away
and didn’t even feel it
spill onto you
maybe it was
only tears,
only water
after all
© Jennifer N., Chickasha, OK
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mindless_dreaming BRONZE said...
on Jul. 9 2012 at 4:26 pm
Wow I really liked this - beautiful
devikaarora GOLD said...
on Jul. 23 2011 at 12:18 pm
Woah !
This was awesome!
Had such a deep meaning...
Alisha62293 BRONZE said...
on Dec. 15 2010 at 7:38 am
You did an amazing job =) it was very insightful and was very deep. keep up the good work
CammyLashay SILVER said...
on Sep. 18 2010 at 7:20 pm
Loved the poem
AbbotRabbit GOLD said...
on Nov. 9 2009 at 2:36 pm
This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
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I really enjoyed it.
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aspiring.author.09 PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 30 2009 at 11:45 pm
Quite amazing, this was a very well written piece. Keep it up!
distant_dreamer GOLD said...
on Aug. 30 2009 at 9:42 pm
I love this poem!!! Great Job! Check out my work sometime! Thanks a billion!!! <3
given lie said...
on Aug. 30 2009 at 8:35 pm
I like the pesimistic mood of the relationship in your poem. Kudos to Sarah W.
TheUnknownGuest GOLD said...
on Aug. 30 2009 at 7:19 pm
I really like that :)
RadioShower PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 30 2009 at 7:11 pm
so sad!!!!
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