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Sickness MAG

By Anonymous

You wreak black
like nightfall.
You words are
dark and sharp.
You spear hearts
to see them bleed.
You run wild
with the sun
which so willingly
burns you.
Your harsh words
have never echoed
so clear and sound
with the wind.
Your words dug
gashes in the moon
and light the sky.
Dark looms and
has never hesitated.
We wonder why

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on Jul. 23 2012 at 12:08 pm
BeautifulFlowerLove, Eutawville, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
yolo and solo dolo

love it, keep it comein 

on Jul. 23 2012 at 9:51 am
leatherina GOLD, Sicklerville, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
“A hero is someone who rebels or seems to rebel against the facts of existence and seems to conquer them. Obviously that can only work at moments. It can't be a lasting thing. That's not saying that people shouldn't keep trying to rebel against the facts of existence. Someday, who knows, we might conquer death, disease and war.” -Jim Morrison

that's really beautiful and insightful! please check out mine?

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on Mar. 13 2012 at 4:22 pm
vazenitran98, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"I had the blues because I had no shoes until upon the street,I met a man who had no feet."

This was great,too! Glad that I read it.

on Jan. 13 2012 at 4:37 pm
AlaskaFrost GOLD, Acushnet, Massachusetts
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This is great! I love the imagery you use :)

on Jan. 11 2012 at 11:28 am
chrissie_star GOLD, Commerce, California
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Favorite Quote:
Its just another chapter in the past just turn the page dont close the book.

please check out my poem 'been there done that "

on Jan. 7 2012 at 3:01 pm
Mimi15 PLATINUM, Belfast, Maine
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Check out my poem 'On our Own'

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on Dec. 16 2011 at 12:14 pm
taylor1226, Alexandria, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:

very good.:)

on Nov. 28 2011 at 12:08 pm
musicidraw PLATINUM, Manton, Michigan
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I think this is my favorite of all your work. it sounds like something I would write. I love it :)

on Nov. 24 2011 at 5:14 pm
RaveFire PLATINUM, Vancouver, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes You Have To Give Up Your Life To Save It." ~some book that i don't remember the name of

"Live Life Like There's No Yesterday" ~ random billboard

"If No One Can Hurt You, Then Nobody Loves You" ` ~ Kerli?

harsh but well written.

on Nov. 2 2011 at 5:56 pm
mattisonteeter GOLD, Los Angeles, California
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Beautiful. Very descriptive

on Oct. 11 2011 at 10:44 pm
ZCmusiclover SILVER, Ashland, Pennsylvania
6 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let us endeavour so to live that when we come to die even the undertaker will be sorry- Mark Twain

spectacular, I really liked the imagery it created in my minds eye. could you read some of mine?

on Oct. 11 2011 at 2:55 pm
gottagetout17 SILVER, Carlisle, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"No matter what anybody tells you words and ideas can change the world" ~Dead Poets Society

I meant to rate 5 but i put 4 darn touch screen :( anyway great job! Loved it

on Oct. 11 2011 at 11:37 am
you should keep up the good work

on Oct. 11 2011 at 11:36 am
this is very good you should keep up the good work

on Sep. 19 2011 at 2:33 pm
olympian-queen, Charleston, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
Yesterday is history. Tommorrow is a mystery. And today? Today is a gift that's why they call it the present.

Perfect title...this poem really does make u sick.can u say throw up in ink?

on Sep. 19 2011 at 2:29 pm
Its.beautiful. BRONZE, Goose Creek, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"Immature love says: 'I love you because I need you.' Mature love says 'I need you because I love you." — Erich Fromm

dude.. i was reading this and so many memories came to my head. I just really appreciate your "original" use of personification, and all that. overall, this poem... sucks!

on Sep. 19 2011 at 11:33 am
WeAllBurn PLATINUM, Vermilion, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"The weak can never forgive. Forgiveness is the attribute of the strong." ~Mahatma Gandhi

wow <3 great work (:

on Aug. 28 2011 at 2:22 pm
Sarahhhhhhh BRONZE, Malden, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"The silence depressed me. It wasn't the silence of silence. It was my own silence."
- Sylvia Plath, The Bell Jar

Gosh I loved this, amazing work.



Would anyone check mine out? Thanks

on Aug. 6 2011 at 2:41 pm
Lola_Black GOLD, Harrison, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"I've always been famous. It's just everybody's just now finding out." --Lady Gaga

Nice! Beautiful imagery. Now, do you mind if i add a few more poems to your list of stuff to read?

on Jul. 15 2011 at 9:04 am
ElleNicole BRONZE, St. Louis, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"My role in society, or any artist's or poet's role, is to try and express what we all feel. Not to tell people how to feel. Not as a preacher, not as a leader, but as a reflection of us all."

Good work! =) Check out my poem? Thanks!