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Unravel Me

March 26, 2014
By Zolenz DIAMOND, Musquodoboit Harbour, NS, Other
Zolenz DIAMOND, Musquodoboit Harbour, NS, Other
65 articles 0 photos 173 comments

Favorite Quote:
The pain that have cost us, the evils which have never happened.
- Thomas Jefferson


unravel me
my hopes
and dreams
my insecurities
what brings me clarity
what causes my
insanity.



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Zolenz DIAMOND said...
on Sep. 18 2014 at 6:01 pm
Zolenz DIAMOND, Musquodoboit Harbour, NS, Other
65 articles 0 photos 173 comments

Favorite Quote:
The pain that have cost us, the evils which have never happened.
- Thomas Jefferson

thankyou!  

on Sep. 16 2014 at 3:52 pm
elycavill SILVER, Samobor, Other
5 articles 0 photos 186 comments

Favorite Quote:
Leave nothing but footprints,
Take nothing but pictures,
Kill nothing but time.

I am not sure if my comment is going to be published because I used word d*mn, so again, so d*amn good poem! loved it and keep up :)

on Sep. 16 2014 at 3:51 pm
elycavill SILVER, Samobor, Other
5 articles 0 photos 186 comments

Favorite Quote:
Leave nothing but footprints,
Take nothing but pictures,
Kill nothing but time.

Short and full of deep thinking, so (damn') good. I really love this poem, and the rhyme in the end is like sugar in the end! keep up writing for sure!

on Jul. 12 2014 at 11:08 am
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
81 articles 5 photos 1486 comments

Favorite Quote:
To love is to be vulnerable; Triumph is born out of struggle; We notice shadows most when they stand alone in the midst of overwhelming light.

If poeple realy do care about you, then they're willing to unravel you and be with you. Short as it may be, it's powerful! ^_^ thank you, for sharing this!