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Forgiven MAG

March 14, 2014
By theSunfloweredCrow PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
theSunfloweredCrow PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"Can't keep my eyes from the circling sky,
Tongue-tied and twisted
Just an earth-bound misfit, I"
~Pink Floyd

"Now is blessed
The rest
remembered "

~Jim Morrison


The touch of your fingertips,
Are rose petals brushing palms;
the serenity of your mercy


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on Apr. 6 2014 at 3:07 am
theSunfloweredCrow PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
47 articles 0 photos 66 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Can't keep my eyes from the circling sky,
Tongue-tied and twisted
Just an earth-bound misfit, I"
~Pink Floyd

"Now is blessed
The rest
remembered "

~Jim Morrison

Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it. :)

on Apr. 6 2014 at 2:59 am
theSunfloweredCrow PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
47 articles 0 photos 66 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Can't keep my eyes from the circling sky,
Tongue-tied and twisted
Just an earth-bound misfit, I"
~Pink Floyd

"Now is blessed
The rest
remembered "

~Jim Morrison

Aww thank you. I worked really hard on this poem. I'm really glad you liked it. :)

on Apr. 5 2014 at 4:34 pm
WinterRose76 SILVER, Ok., Florida
6 articles 6 photos 183 comments

Favorite Quote:
Arise and be all that you dream - Flyleaf

Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful. You've managed to pack so much meaning into three short lines. Well done!

KarateGirl11 said...
on Mar. 26 2014 at 10:02 pm
This poem is really good!