Little Dream World MAG

November 10, 2008
By Katie Richardson, Fayetteville, AR

I walk
In my field of colored paper flowers
Watching the petals
Slowly fall off
And flutter through
The rainbow colored wind
As the white rain
Begins to drip down
From candy flavored clouds
To soak the multicolored flying petals
Of the paper flowers
And bring them to rest
In the dying black grass.


The author's comments:
I just wrote this as a little insight to the stuff I keep hidden from people, inside everyone there's a little darkness and then there might be a lot of light. Also, I just wanted to see how discriptive I could get and still allow the poem to flow, I pray I did well.

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on Oct. 20 2011 at 11:24 am
deleteddeletedFoff, Columbus, Ohio
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you should make it go deeper and instead of repeating flowers you should choose different imagery to help show the innocence being lost to the blackened earth. is it charred from a storm? how about scorged from a flame?

on Feb. 16 2010 at 5:22 pm
chrischris BRONZE, Richmond, Kentucky
2 articles 7 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
how do I tell you everything that is in my heart? impossible to begin. enough. no. begin.- maira kalman

hmm. this is rather eerily reminiscent of an evanescence song called "imaginary."

ariwrites94 said...
on Aug. 17 2009 at 3:31 pm
Interesting.

on Aug. 16 2009 at 11:07 pm
annkaykay2011 DIAMOND, Lansing, Michigan
75 articles 11 photos 137 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I am who I am, sorry, no changes."

The flow was great,

amazing imagery,

kinda dark

Sanah BRONZE said...
on Aug. 16 2009 at 9:06 pm
Sanah BRONZE, Bridgewater, New Jersey
2 articles 0 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
"There is no exquisite beauty without some strangeness in the proportion" -Edgar Allan Poe

i love the discription of everything (:

on Aug. 15 2009 at 6:02 pm
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
62 articles 1 photo 881 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Some things will never change"---Tupac

Awww. This is so beautiful. It creates colorful images and I love it! Great job!




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