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The rebirth of spring

February 19, 2014
By Emayen_Laweit_Ryuzaki SILVER, Denver, Colorado
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Emayen_Laweit_Ryuzaki SILVER, Denver, Colorado
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The first to apologize is the bravest. The first to forgive is the strongest. The first to forget is the happiest. - unknown<br /> no matter how gifted you are you alone can not change the world... but that&#039;s what makes it so special. - L

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I hate the thought of another day coming along
The winter is as cold as my heart
But
I wonder if I even have a heart
Once I sold my soul for love
I am a dead flower that withered in the winter snow
I wish for a person in my life as new as spring
Someone as warm as the sun
Who can melt down the snow
And
Rain down on my roots
Without drowning me in disappear

© LZ A., Grand Junction, CO

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after a heartbreak its best to think positive and keeping moving on and never giving up on this wounderfull emotion.
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Olivia-Atlet ELITE said...
on Jul. 7 2014 at 1:05 pm
Olivia-Atlet ELITE, Dardenne Prairie, Missouri
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"To these the past hath its phantoms,<br /> More real than solid earth;<br /> And to these death does not mean decay,<br /> But only another birth" <br /> - Isabella Banks

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I really liked this! I like how at first you compared yourself to a withered flower, and then to a tree, which is strong and hardy! Please keep writing! CX
TevyRae PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 25 2014 at 3:27 pm
TevyRae PLATINUM, Pittsfield, Pennsylvania
24 articles 7 photos 80 comments

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&quot;Here is a small fact: You are going to die.&quot; ~The Book Thief<br /> &quot;You have no stupidity inside of your adorable little self.&quot; ~Mikey Pasterik

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I love the lines "I wonder if I even have a heart- once i sold my soul for love" Very deep, and it speaks to me personally. The only thing I would change about this poem, though, would be to add commas and periods where needed. If you go to the trouble of setting it up in poetry fashion, why not just add in little grammatical changes? (It's just my personal opinion- If you would rather have your poertry without periods and commas that's totally up to you.)

Lovely poem all around. Good Work.   P.S. could you comment on some of my newer work? I'd really appreciate feedback. Thank you!
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND said...
on Jun. 20 2014 at 9:13 am
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
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To love is to be vulnerable; Triumph is born out of struggle; We notice shadows most when they stand alone in the midst of overwhelming light.

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There is a right person, who can do all that. This is great. Thank you, for sharing this.