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Cold.

February 18, 2014
By ImmortalRose GOLD, Arvada, Colorado
ImmortalRose GOLD, Arvada, Colorado
17 articles 1 photo 168 comments

Favorite Quote:
Your pain is the breaking of the shell that encloses your understanding.
Khalil Gibran


Cold is your heart
Earth shattering envy
Blood curdling hurt

Why is your heart a stone
Is someone hurting you
when you're at home

Or does the taunting get to you
The ones who call you mean
or gay

Is there something deep inside
that hurts so bad
you can only confide

In the cold so deep
so dark
Icing your tender wounds

From those around you
who just don't know
that there's a heart in you


The author's comments:
This is to the bullies out there. I simply don't understand what could possibly force people to hurt someone else. My personal belief is that its from something painful inside.

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on Nov. 11 2014 at 1:52 pm
ImmortalRose GOLD, Arvada, Colorado
17 articles 1 photo 168 comments

Favorite Quote:
Your pain is the breaking of the shell that encloses your understanding.
Khalil Gibran

Thank you!

on Mar. 20 2014 at 8:06 pm
ImmortalRose GOLD, Arvada, Colorado
17 articles 1 photo 168 comments

Favorite Quote:
Your pain is the breaking of the shell that encloses your understanding.
Khalil Gibran

You are too!!!

on Mar. 20 2014 at 8:03 pm
Nella.Girl97 BRONZE, Ashland, Wisconsin
1 article 0 photos 437 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Keep on dreaming even if it breaks your heart."

You are sucha talented writer! Love this!

on Mar. 4 2014 at 10:46 am
JacobTheOrdinary PLATINUM, Rancho Cucamonga, California
43 articles 0 photos 38 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Fiction is the lie that tells the truth."

This is a good piece. I like it. You captured the third person view on bullying and it's a powerful perception. Keep up the great work.

on Feb. 27 2014 at 10:03 pm
haley101 DIAMOND, Windsor, Connecticut
70 articles 5 photos 195 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Someone I loved once gave me a box full of darkness. It took me years to understand that this too, was a gift.”

― Mary Oliver

I love how you delve into their concious, though, and give even "despicable" people a voice.  

on Feb. 27 2014 at 12:26 pm
ImmortalRose GOLD, Arvada, Colorado
17 articles 1 photo 168 comments

Favorite Quote:
Your pain is the breaking of the shell that encloses your understanding.
Khalil Gibran

Im sorry to hear that/..

on Feb. 25 2014 at 8:06 pm
haley101 DIAMOND, Windsor, Connecticut
70 articles 5 photos 195 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Someone I loved once gave me a box full of darkness. It took me years to understand that this too, was a gift.”

― Mary Oliver

this is very intense and powerful. the hard thing is, I can relate.