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in vain

February 8, 2014
By Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
214 articles 14 photos 1163 comments

Favorite Quote:
“If you're losing your soul and you know it, then you've still got a soul left to lose”
― Charles Bukowski


i'd lie down with dogs a thousand
times over before i'd
ever
return to you(r bed), and i hope you
know that you are just
as vain
as your "efforts"



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on Jun. 3 2014 at 11:09 pm
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
214 articles 14 photos 1163 comments

Favorite Quote:
“If you're losing your soul and you know it, then you've still got a soul left to lose”
― Charles Bukowski

Wow, thank you! That's exactly what I was going for :) thanks for reading.

Brisa PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 2 2014 at 4:47 am
Brisa PLATINUM, Wasilla, Alaska
20 articles 7 photos 38 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Si dan a tú papel alineado, escribas el otro camino."
"If they give you lined paper, write the other way"
-Juan Ramon Jiminez

Short, incisive and yet tells a story. The feeling I get from your spacing, diction and lowercase"i" is one of smooth disdain and distant, cold "over you"-ness. Great job man :) loved how short you kept it. It made the tone that much more intense. 


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