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Chasing Perfection

January 8, 2014
By Zolenz DIAMOND, Musquodoboit Harbour, NS, Other
Zolenz DIAMOND, Musquodoboit Harbour, NS, Other
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Favorite Quote:
The pain that have cost us, the evils which have never happened.
- Thomas Jefferson


she craved an embrace
a hand to with interlace
then she saw his smile
his undeniable fire

shards of ice and flames in ire
they've been set afire
she had a lonely heart
he was in love from the start

they were fighting this
this perfect storm
fighting their feelings
their young minds reeling

lost in their senses
her eyes locked on his
is this real
can we live happily, surreal?

she was running around chasing perfection
but with his affection
she found she needed none
trickery and misery begone, I am done.


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on Jan. 1 2015 at 7:31 am
ScarletIce4695 GOLD, Karachi, Other
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U r welcome!!!!

Zolenz DIAMOND said...
on Dec. 31 2014 at 6:02 pm
Zolenz DIAMOND, Musquodoboit Harbour, NS, Other
65 articles 0 photos 177 comments

Favorite Quote:
The pain that have cost us, the evils which have never happened.
- Thomas Jefferson

Thankyou! Haha :) and thanks for the feedback on other work!

on Dec. 31 2014 at 6:18 am
ScarletIce4695 GOLD, Karachi, Other
13 articles 1 photo 57 comments
After reading this much of ur poetry i don't think i need to read any more. I should just write awesome in the comment of every poem of urs coz they r really all awesome!!! Keep the talent coming :p