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If you knew

December 4, 2013
By Emayen_Laweit_Ryuzaki SILVER, Denver, Colorado
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Emayen_Laweit_Ryuzaki SILVER, Denver, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
The first to apologize is the bravest. The first to forgive is the strongest. The first to forget is the happiest. - unknown<br /> no matter how gifted you are you alone can not change the world... but that&#039;s what makes it so special. - L

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if you knew
your smile excites me
your voice, I can recognize anywhere
your touch
sends me to mars
I’m confused
But I keep living on
Day by day
I see you looking at me
This feeling
Sends me to mars
Walking around in a world without you
Walking around the places I used to run into you
You were never there when I looked for you
Yet I want to hear what you want to say
I’m listening even if you think I’m not
You look up at me and the feeling…
Sends me to mars

© Mark S., Kannapolis, NC

The author's comments:
I wrote this a long time ago and its one of my favorite one's I've written.
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Olivia-Atlet ELITE said...
on Jul. 7 2014 at 1:09 pm
Olivia-Atlet ELITE, Dardenne Prairie, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"To these the past hath its phantoms,<br /> More real than solid earth;<br /> And to these death does not mean decay,<br /> But only another birth" <br /> - Isabella Banks

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This is really good! I love it! XD