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December 2, 2013
By EscapingfromReality GOLD, Syracuse, New York
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EscapingfromReality GOLD, Syracuse, New York
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I will follow when you prove you can lead.

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Who are you?
But then again,
Who am I?
Just some girl
you so happened to meet?

A lucky encounter?

I cant help but wonder..
Would this work?
How could this work?

You tell me I'm yours.
And only yours
And the butterflies ERUPT
Fleeing through my body.

You've the void
That's been chiseled into
heart for so long.

I am distracted by the thought of you.
Tormented by the wonders of you.
And killed by your far away words of love.

I want nothing else,
No one else.
Other than you..

I truly do, love you.

© Julia K., Old Tappan, NJ

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The heart wants what the head screams is wrong.. Enjoy. :)
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EscapingfromReality GOLD said...
on Dec. 6 2013 at 8:04 am
EscapingfromReality GOLD, Syracuse, New York
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Thank you, very much. :)
Eyesolating BRONZE said...
on Dec. 5 2013 at 5:27 pm
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Don't second guess yourself, this was beautiful.
EscapingfromReality GOLD said...
on Dec. 4 2013 at 8:47 am
EscapingfromReality GOLD, Syracuse, New York
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Thank you, so much. That really does mean alot. Sometimes I second guess my work.
mady.neal GOLD said...
on Dec. 4 2013 at 8:29 am
mady.neal GOLD, Monrovia, Indiana
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Wow!  That is basically all that I can say!  I think that you did a great job expressing emotions and thoughts that many, many of us feel today.  No advice!  Just...great!