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Underneath It All

October 31, 2013
By Raveneyes BRONZE, Franklin Tx., Texas
Raveneyes BRONZE, Franklin Tx., Texas
4 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love me, Hate me, but just don't play me.


Underneath the booze and pills,
Underneath the looks that could kill.
Underneath the scars and broken hearts,
Behind the locked doors where she falls apart.
Underneath the black make-up and clothes,
Underneath the black nails and soul.
Underneath this scar covered skin,
Is a bruised heart that’s broken, stitched, and sunken in.
Hiding from its fear of love,
Hiding from the world above.
Wondering if there’s someone there,
And hoping that the love her more than the clothes she wears.
Going crazy from the fights,
Begging God to make it right,
And praying she lives to see daylight.
I am that girl
Hoping she won’t fall.
I am that girl underneath it all.


The author's comments:
I went through a terrible time in my life were I lost my best friend and a family member in the same week.

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on Nov. 8 2013 at 2:02 pm
Raveneyes BRONZE, Franklin Tx., Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Love me, Hate me, but just don't play me.

Thank you for the comment it was nice and i appreceat it. I will certainly keep writing.

on Nov. 8 2013 at 2:01 pm
Raveneyes BRONZE, Franklin Tx., Texas
4 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love me, Hate me, but just don't play me.

Hearing that really means a lot to me. I appreceate the praise.

on Nov. 8 2013 at 2:00 pm
Raveneyes BRONZE, Franklin Tx., Texas
4 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love me, Hate me, but just don't play me.

Thanks for the comment it really means a lot. I've been writing poetry, music, and stories since i was 9 and it feels great to know that someone thanks that they are great.

on Nov. 6 2013 at 8:23 pm
micshea99 PLATINUM, Matthews, North Carolina
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This is gorgeous.

on Nov. 6 2013 at 10:40 am
KaylaaLovee GOLD, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
14 articles 1 photo 61 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Imperfection is beauty. Madness is genius. And its better to be absolutely ridiculous than absolutely boring. And when it comes down to it, I let them think what they want. If they care enough to bother with what I do, I'm already better than them."

Great Poem. Stay Strong :)

on Nov. 6 2013 at 9:57 am
mynameisnothabib GOLD, Quinlan, Texas
10 articles 5 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
"One idea lights a thousand candles"
~Ralph Waldo Emerson

I can relate to this, and i love how you show yourself in poems, and you aren't afraid to share.  love your wording and the ways you describe certain things. Keep it up(: