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My Six

October 14, 2013
By Shill13 BRONZE, Licking, Missouri
Shill13 BRONZE, Licking, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
Good thing about music is when it hits you, you feel no pain. -Bob Marley


Feet digging into the mud
sinking farther & farther
each second.
Carrying my best friend
over my shoulder
to safety.

Bang - bang guns screaming
above the deep trenches.
Teeth grinding,
Sweat pouring
as I watch my six.

Red from the wounded
becomes
more & more
popular each day,
I’m here in this place
they call
war.

Every day,
Every moment,
Every Second,
I wait in this death trap
I know coming home
is getting less
& less
true.
Another day
every man for
them self.
A place
believed to be hell,
trying to survive
watching my six


The author's comments:
When I wrote this poem I noticed I was emotional drawn to the thought of my father when he was in Vietnam.

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