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Long ,Fast,Loud,Nights

October 4, 2013
By Amber Williams BRONZE, Oak Park, Michigan
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I have favorite months now October, November, and December
There full of fast nights later nights and early mornings
Mornings in which I wish I could rewind
All the laughs,scares,and moments to remember



These fast nights are full of nothing but Amber’s crew
Krystal the brave but shy one
Jasmine the smart and loud one
Tayana the crazy funny one
Deja the pretty,exciting,naïve one
And then
Amber the outgoing,loud,wild,funny,dingy one

© Shannon E., Glendale, AZ

The author's comments:
Amber uses personal experience to write this poem and she uses details to give emphasis for words. Such as in line four putting emphasis on the word to create emotion to the poem she then also uses good details so that you can try to relate to her poem being a teenager and she also uses white space a little bit but it’s mostly good word usage. She also does a good job using tone that relates to the emotion of her poem which made me enjoy it.
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