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The Brine

September 21, 2013
By Blynn SILVER, Waco, Texas
Blynn SILVER, Waco, Texas
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If every tear not shed
Sifted into a subliminal crevice;
An ocean would be conceived.
Growing larger everyday,
Like a babe unborn-



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on Dec. 24 2013 at 5:53 pm
Myvoice4change SILVER, Other, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Everything will be ok in the end. If it's not okay, it's not the end."

Nice! Short, simple, yet conveying emotion and meaning. I like how you are descriptive as well, and use metaphors and similies.