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Lies...

September 5, 2013
By ImmortalRose GOLD, Arvada, Colorado
ImmortalRose GOLD, Arvada, Colorado
17 articles 1 photo 168 comments

Favorite Quote:
Your pain is the breaking of the shell that encloses your understanding.
Khalil Gibran


Turn around
Never look back
Hold your ground
don't let any slack

You push me away
You pull me apart
You often sway
Though till death do we part

I say goodbye
You beg me to stay
I know you lie
And whisper go away


The author's comments:
This is about my parents divorce.

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on Feb. 16 2014 at 1:33 pm
ImmortalRose GOLD, Arvada, Colorado
17 articles 1 photo 168 comments

Favorite Quote:
Your pain is the breaking of the shell that encloses your understanding.
Khalil Gibran

Thank you so much!!!

on Feb. 15 2014 at 6:19 pm
Crystallite BRONZE, Santa Elena, Other
2 articles 2 photos 347 comments
it sounds great!

on Feb. 15 2014 at 6:14 pm
ImmortalRose GOLD, Arvada, Colorado
17 articles 1 photo 168 comments

Favorite Quote:
Your pain is the breaking of the shell that encloses your understanding.
Khalil Gibran

aww thank you!!! MY FIRST COMMENT!!!

on Feb. 15 2014 at 5:29 pm
theatregirl PLATINUM, Lathrup Village, Michigan
30 articles 12 photos 209 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To thine own self be true," -from Hamlet, a play by Shakespeare.
"I have sworn on the altar of god eternal hostility against all forms of tyranny over the mind of man." - Thomas Jefferson

great piece!! My favorites stanza is the second one. I think it would totally make a good song, if your into that writing music!!  i would tots turn that into song. keep writing