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Defective Dreamcatcher

August 25, 2013
By freeperson DIAMOND, Burlington, Vermont
freeperson DIAMOND, Burlington, Vermont
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Favorite Quote:
"Have you seen the way he looks at you, the way his expression softens and his eyes are like stars...?" - Ara Weston


I toss and turn
Something's not right
The dreamcatcher I hung
Above my bed
Isn't working
And something is dancing
Inside my head
Saying, "Come with me,come with me."
I try to resist
The dancing thing
Not trying to glance
At it's blond hair blue eyes
And it's childish voice
But I know it's not
A child anymore
For it wears
A white silk robe
And a light halo
I open my eyes
And throw out
The defective dreamcatcher
For it tells the truth to often.



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on Sep. 11 2013 at 4:15 pm
DawnieRae BRONZE, Lancaster, Ohio
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no way! That's awesome! 

on Sep. 10 2013 at 7:04 pm
freeperson DIAMOND, Burlington, Vermont
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Favorite Quote:
"Have you seen the way he looks at you, the way his expression softens and his eyes are like stars...?" - Ara Weston

Wow thnx!! And the picture was actually something I closed my eyes and picked, so I had no idea what it was until i sent it in...(:

on Sep. 8 2013 at 8:30 pm
DawnieRae BRONZE, Lancaster, Ohio
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I love your new poem freeperson!!!! It is absolutly captivating and breathtaking! I couldn't stop reading it till the end! I also love the picture!