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Eden's Sweet Light

August 4, 2013
By Shade3043 DIAMOND, Shade3043 Did This, In Case Of Anonymous, Other
Shade3043 DIAMOND, Shade3043 Did This, In Case Of Anonymous, Other
87 articles 0 photos 168 comments

Favorite Quote:
When I was a boy, I would always hear scary things in the news and my mother would say to me, "Always look for the helpers. Everywhere you look you will always find people helping." - Fred Rogers


The allure of unknown fires welding the portraits puzzles the roses.
Getting lost in the gardens hidden inside of the hypnotic gaze of the frozen.
Curing the silence of fantasy's shepherds.
Running away to the sinking castle walls.
Knights of dreams and obsidian guard the uncharted waters of Eden.

Where the flowers gracefully bloom in the riverbeds of love.
Where the cloaks of sunlight embrace your soul.
Sweep up the filth from the moonlight ground.
The truth separated from the poison unwound.
Pages shattered from the sin's echoed answers.
Conquering the ocean surface, but straying from the depths.
How can you enjoy life surrounded by death?

Floating on the waterways in the leaves' gentle sonata.
Falling off the world, as the portraits break away.
The anguish on the faces talk into my veins.
Putrid water falls from the stars.
The life of the sun lies broken.
So, I'm just here, a mask picking up the brilliant shards.



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on Apr. 28 2014 at 12:50 am
burningpizzavoid SILVER, ROYAL PALM BEACH, Florida
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omg i love this its beautiful and the word choice is amazing and i wish i could write like this

Alabian GOLD said...
on Aug. 26 2013 at 3:43 pm
Alabian GOLD, Limbo, Other
13 articles 2 photos 126 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you can fly, don't stop at the sky cause there are footprints on the moon" - Owl City

Wow. Gorgeous vocabulary you have there, Shade! You have a knack at finding the perfect words and using them in just the right way! :D

on Aug. 14 2013 at 2:47 am
Shade3043 DIAMOND, Shade3043 Did This, In Case Of Anonymous, Other
87 articles 0 photos 168 comments

Favorite Quote:
When I was a boy, I would always hear scary things in the news and my mother would say to me, "Always look for the helpers. Everywhere you look you will always find people helping." - Fred Rogers

Thank you very much! :D

on Aug. 13 2013 at 8:55 am
DeathOfAStar GOLD, Kailua, Hawaii
11 articles 1 photo 70 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Emancipate yourself from mental slavery"




- Bob Marley

Your poem is really good. c:

on Aug. 13 2013 at 7:44 am
Shade3043 DIAMOND, Shade3043 Did This, In Case Of Anonymous, Other
87 articles 0 photos 168 comments

Favorite Quote:
When I was a boy, I would always hear scary things in the news and my mother would say to me, "Always look for the helpers. Everywhere you look you will always find people helping." - Fred Rogers

Thank you for the feedback! :D

on Aug. 13 2013 at 1:51 am
maelstrom14 GOLD, Oak Habor, Washington
14 articles 0 photos 63 comments

Favorite Quote:
let me not to the marriage of true minds admit impediments...etc

Very very good

on Aug. 13 2013 at 1:50 am
Shade3043 DIAMOND, Shade3043 Did This, In Case Of Anonymous, Other
87 articles 0 photos 168 comments

Favorite Quote:
When I was a boy, I would always hear scary things in the news and my mother would say to me, "Always look for the helpers. Everywhere you look you will always find people helping." - Fred Rogers

Thank you very much! :D

on Aug. 13 2013 at 1:50 am
Shade3043 DIAMOND, Shade3043 Did This, In Case Of Anonymous, Other
87 articles 0 photos 168 comments

Favorite Quote:
When I was a boy, I would always hear scary things in the news and my mother would say to me, "Always look for the helpers. Everywhere you look you will always find people helping." - Fred Rogers

Thank you very much! Your feedback is much appreciated!

innov8 BRONZE said...
on Aug. 12 2013 at 8:15 am
innov8 BRONZE, Hyderabad, Other
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great poem! i love the opening lines

GreyGirl ELITE said...
on Aug. 12 2013 at 3:11 am
GreyGirl ELITE, Pohang,Kyungbuk, Other
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Great job! Good imagery. Very nice.